Love and Hate Relationship (poem)
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I love you
But I want you to hate me
For loving you
.
I hate me
And I want you to love me
For loving you
.
I hate you
For not loving me
When I love you
.
I love me
For not hating you
When I love you
.
I love you
Even if you love another
And don't love me
.
I hate you
For loving another
And not loving me
.
I hate me
For loving another
So you can't love me
.
I love me
For loving another
Before I loved you
.
I love you
And let you love another
When I want to hate
.
I hate you
For not hating me
When I want to love
.
I hate me
For wanting to hate you
When I only love
.
I love me
For never hating you
When you only love
.
I love you
And I love another
Which makes me hate myself
.
I hate you
And I hate your other
Which makes me know I love
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Comments (3 so far!)
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ElshaHawk LoA
It took me a bit writing it to make sense, and I had to read it several times myself as I put it together, so I can imagine how many times a reader has to read it to grasp the enormity of what is going on here. It is a puzzle, and one of the heart.
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Robert Quick
I swear I commented on this when it was posted but I guess it didn't take. I like the almost mathematical interplay of statements. While I'm not great at the Alice in Wonderland type logic and reasoning puzzles I do enjoy the word play which is what I see here.