Frost

Jim Stitzel

I dabble a little in a lot of things — writing, webcomics, gaming, photography, web design, music, and more. I write code full-time and words in the gaps in between.


He resists the voices, even as they wrap around him. He fights but is soon overwhelmed. There are simply too many of them. He feels them clawing at his mind, dragging at his psyche, pulling him down into unknown depths -- and suddenly he is very afraid.

His head tilts forward, and streamers of smoke pour from his nostrils, black as soot, back into the red box. They carry with them a single wisp of white smoke, a wisp that appears to undulate away for just a moment. But more black fingers of smoke wrap around it, pulling it in, holding it tight, and soon all the smoke is once again contained within the box.

His body falls limp, coated in frost, half draped across the table. His eyes are empty white orbs, colorless and dead.

Two figures stand at the door to the room. One goes to the table and replaces the lid to the box, which closes with a quiet click. The other fishes the obscene coin from the dead man's pocket.

The two men exchange a glance, and the smoke merchants leave without ever saying a word.


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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

Jafar is trapped in the lamp. I think this man knew that this was his fate, though.

  • #2655 Posted 7 years ago
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Jim Stitzel

Jim Stitzel

Let's just say he was expecting a very different outcome.

  • #2659 Posted 7 years ago
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