It was all so groovy, dig?

DeerDairy

I am my own OC. I will keep track of my life. These may be news, or they may be venting. I need somewhere to write the truth of my heart. Probably it won't interest you.

Some of it will be fictional. I'm my own write-in OC.

I'm somewhat troubled...

if by somewhat I mean massively.


And pretty soon I, being a suave sort of kid, I said to the chick, I said, those aren't badgers, and she lets off slappin my thigh like it was henny bloody youngman, are you following? and smiling we took off the seatbelts and hung onto the hand straps and let loose. Ain't nothing wrong with that.

So there we were, the noise was deafening but there was the station and it was like totally rad, like ohmaGOD so I handed her up the secondary ladder, that was the former ladder, so to speak, and then I went up too and the space station was huge but also really cramped, like february 12th cramped, unreal.

So I handed her the venison and we chowed down on it, sprinkling this like glitter all over the skin

You ever had bright venison before? I love venison the springtime, can you get it? I had never had it before with barbecue sauce, that was the whole start of that thing for me, of course she brought it with her to begin with.

So we washed up with more wodka and in the morning we hit I 95.

I was pulled over, sure.


Comments (4 so far!)

Fantasist

Fantasist

I don't really have a full grasp of what's going on but the diction and narrator's style is awesome and I love it!

  • #2061 Posted 8 years ago
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DeerDairy

DeerDairy

It's totally unplanned free writing that I had no clear story for, I just wanted to write and write and be quirky in no specific manner, just letting a voice emerge, though I think my switching of idioms from valley girl to beatnik to hard boiled detective etc. may detract from the immersion. It's a sort of science fiction fantasy caprice, I guess. I'm a fantasist of a kind as well, i guess.

  • #2064 Posted 8 years ago
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Fantasist

Fantasist

Aha yes it's a similar flow to my constant internal monologue and I feel like that's why I like it so much. I believe you and I will get along swimmingly lol

  • #2066 Posted 8 years ago
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DeerDairy

DeerDairy

I am delighted to hear so, and I welcome the prospects. :D

  • #2067 Posted 8 years ago
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Inspired by (sequel to):

https://youtu.be/onXHGZtAT4g

Like, there I was, see? And the gal was like hey babe, come up to the …

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