Young Like the Night
My name is Drew Klopfer. I'm a 23-year-old artist in Los Angeles. I was an avid writer on Ficly when I was younger and now I'm trying to get back into it.
We walk up in the club like we own the place.
IDs in hand, giving good face.
But two steps in we realize,
The place is fucking dead.
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We go to the bar,
Get a drink,
And wait.
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The night is young,
Young like us.
People will come.
No need to fuss.
All we gotta do,
Is sip our drinks,
And wait.
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Two drinks in we realize,
it might not get any better than this.
We wait.
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Three drinks and im feeling th alcohol,
I dont give a fuck about punctuation
Monica jus spilled her drink on me ugh
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4 drinks longislands thers still no body fucking Monics a bitch no im fine i don need a uber nefj drin
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Robert Quick
I can laugh and I do. This was pretty clever. I've rarely been that drunk but I've been with people that were and the last two lines are nearly perfect incoherent drunken mumblings.
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slapdashmonuments
Are you gonna sing this lyric, GradualUprising, or should ... I??
- #1932 Posted 8 years ago
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Story prompt:
Write some lyrics. It's a different form of storytelling than I'm used to, and I thought it might be fun!
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ElshaHawk LoA
Well that devolved quickly...
I was all ready for something substantial, some boss move, and.. nope, just a mess. I can't even laugh at it because I feel bad for them.