I Wish I Could Tell Them...

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An alumnus of both Ficlets.com and Ficly.com. Who, for some weird reason, is starting his time here with an abundance of cannibalism-themes stories. O.o


I wish I could tell them how beautiful the funeral was. The things everyone said were so touching. Even Aunt Agnes, though I know she was full of shit, talked sweetly about her "beloved nephew" (that she hadn't spoken to since I was 5).

I wish I could tell them all how much I love them. You bring that with you, you know. All the bitterness and resentment you may feel during life disappears like fog in a slight breeze. Yes, even Aunt Agnes. It's quite liberating, really.

And I wish I could tell them that I changed my mind. I don't want to be cremated! Please, God, tell them to stop!

It hurts so much! I can feel the flames breaking down my body, tearing at me like some bloodthirsty beast. Shredding my physical form and reducing me to ash. I had third degree burns on my arm, once. That's a pleasant memory compared to this.

And I know that, even after it's done, the pain will continue.

I wish I could tell them that this pain will never...

Ever...

End.


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ElshaHawk LoA

ElshaHawk LoA

That would suck.

  • #1385 Posted 8 years ago
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HS Wift

HS Wift

Oh wow. That's quite a poweful agony to envisage. Naturally we have no way of knowing what truly happens to our consciousness post mortem, but whatever it is, I truly hope it isn't that.

Great piece, well written.

  • #1386 Posted 8 years ago
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Brebelles

Brebelles

Oh. Wow.

  • #1387 Posted 8 years ago
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  • 4 out of 5
Scarlet Archer

Scarlet Archer

Doctor Who-inspired? Liked it!

  • #2264 Posted 8 years ago
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