Dash for school

Joshua J. Monkey
Author: Joshua J. Monkey

I am nine years old. I love Dream League Soccer but I hate FIFA '15 on Android. I like playing football.

Tom woke up with a yawn: NINE O'CLOCK??

Seeing this, he went cuckoo. He quickly got dressed in a frantic dash, zoomed down the stairs, burst into the kitchen, gobbled up his breakfast, sprinted to school as fast as a cheetah and arrived just in time for registration.

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ethelthefrog

ethelthefrog

Well done, Joshua. You are now a published author. That's all it takes, and you've done it.

I hope your teacher is impressed.

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HSAR

HSAR

The run-on sentence is a good way to show how hurried and rushed Tom is.

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