Sorry David
When I try to picture a faultless face
I see smooth marble curving easily over defined musculature
The epitome of beauty, of strength
and I long to hold that perfect promise against my weathered features
But when my fingers reach that unmarred surface, I flinch
from the unexpected cold
The frozen features a mere record of a momentary ideal
lacking the burn, the change, of growth
A perfection I can only reach once my skin turns as cold
as that lifeless sculpture
Prequels
No prequels yet. Why not write one?
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Storykeeper
Oooh. This is beautiful as a stand-alone, and also invites so many possibilities for continuing. Hmm. The gears are turning.
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slapdashmonuments
I love your treatment of this classic theme and the object you chose as the central image. From the title, I was expecting a light verse, but this is very meaningful. Thank you.
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textual_phoenix
Beautifully written! Such wonderful imagery in such a short piece. Well done!
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ethelthefrog
Lovely imagery here. So often our vision of "perfect" requires the destruction of actual living.